1) The analysis we read about the short story "Butterflies", was an exellent analysis. the reason for this is that the text is well written and composed. She/he uses Paragraphs in a good way, makes a clean and simple introduction and finishes with a good conclusion.
The way she ties her paragraphs is very well executed. She/he takes certain things and people from the earlier paragraps, and uses them to introduce what she is going to say in this paragraph. This also makes it easier to navigate between the paragraphs, when you seek to read about something spesific in the analysis.
I feel that what I have learned from this analysis, is that you can easily improve your text quite a bit. The difference, that just re-phraseing the beginning of your paragraphs can make, is astounding. It can improve the readability and make it easier for all audiences to read, not just the highly educated.
2) linking words:
- Nevertheless
- Therefore
- However
- Furthermore
- Moreover
- In conclusion
- Because
- Then
- Until
- Such as
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